Send your song to Jon for a professional review!
Would you like an assessment of your writing?
- Send your best song to Jon for a professional review! Why only one? Jon can objectively listen and help you discover the strengths and the areas where you need more work in your writing. He can show you what is working and what needs more developing. He can access your idea development, strength of your metaphor and word usage and give you positive steps to making your song, and writing in general stronger. His approach is to help you "Find the Gold" in your writing...and then refine it. After working through the process of writing and rewriting you can then take the lessons you've learned and apply them to your other songs! And it won't cost you any more!
Or maybe you would like help on a specific song?
- Send the song you're working on to Jon in whatever form it is in. Don't worry that it is not finished. For instance if you have a verse and a chorus...and you're not sure they work. Or you don't have a direction for taking the song further. Maybe you have a great Chorus and need verse ideas...or you have verses and need a good hook for your Chorus. Jon will take the time to go through your song and help you to know if you are using your words wisely. And he will brainstorm with you to come up with ideas and directions to take your song to the next level. He can help you know if you've really hooked your idea. Or how to distill all the ideas you have floating around in your song into one "Big Idea".
Just send a simple piano/guitar vocal demo as an mp3
- (Don't worry about quality...as long as we can hear the melody and words) along with a lyric sheet. He will review your music and lyric and send you back a recording of his comments and suggestions. All ideas and suggestions will be yours to use in your song. It's like having your own Silent Writing Partner! After you receive his review if you choose to rewrite your song, send it back to us again in the new form for a 2nd what we call "Combing Review"...For Free!
- If you've come to this site you are well aware of the kind of songs Jon Mohr has written over the last 25 years. Review his lyrics and see again the depth, style and powerful ways in which he uses the subtlety of word combinations with vivid and compelling metaphor to communicate life changing ideas. Song-writing is a craft. Like any craft it is developed and groomed over time. If you are looking for an accurate and honest evaluation along with some great tips and idea directions...you've come to the right place.
- Money Back Guarantee! We are so sure you will find this service a huge benefit that If after you receive Jon's first review you feel like he has not given you the valuable help you've paid for....Just send us an email within 3 days stating your reasons and we'll refund your money...no questions asked!
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